Look Down

Look Down

Plan:

• Problem - Oscar & Bob went outside on the plane wing. 

• Solution - Oscar & Bob got back to safety by using a parachute and landing on the right plane.

 

1998, Weastern Canada, Toronto Pearson Airport. There were two boys called Oscar and Bob. Their Mum was taking them to the Airport. Bob said “can we go to the U.S?”. “No” replied Mum, “We are going to Australia” but Bob ignored Mum. He went to the U.S plane instead of the Australia plane. Oscar followed Bob then Oscar said “where do you think you're going? you are supposed to follow Mum”. “I still want to go to the U.S,” said Bob Oscar sighed and said “ok then”. After Bob & Oscar went in the plane the door shut immediately and they could not get out of it. 

Oscar said “it's not worth it opening the door ” Bob cried and yelled out “Mummy!“ Mum couldn’t hear them because Mum was far away from the U.S plane then they went inside the plane they were in 3rd class which was messy then they went into 2nd class But 2nd class food was not delicious at all then they went into 1st class and it was pretty empty.  Then a waitress came in and said “what are you 2 kids doing in here?” Bob & Oscar were shy then both of them said “we… are the pilots sons”.

The waitress said to the pilot “do you have sons” the pilot answered  “yes, do you want one?” the waitress answered back “uhhh… no thanks” the pilot said “ok then, and don’t bother me so I can start the plane”. Then Bob and Oscar sat on a comfortable seat. It was a master seat; it even had a gigantic TV. The waitress came and said “what do you want for dinner?” Bob said “tacos, poutine, chicken rice, som tam, seafood paella, potato chips, masala dosa, buttered popcorn and lamb shish kebab”. The waitress said “and what do you want Oscar?” 

Oscar said “umm… chicken rice please”. The waitress answered “anything else” "no thanks” replied Oscar then Bob said “let's go out on the plane wing” Oscar said “ok” so then they went in the plane wing then Bob said “LOOK DOWN!!!” then both of them looked down. Suddenly a seagull hit them then they kept on falling until Oscar said “l have a parachute” then they used the parachute then they landed on another plane. It was an Australian plane then they went inside the plane and they saw their Mum and they both shouted “MUM!” Then they hugged Mum and Mum said “where have you been?” Oscar and Bob replied “umm... l was playing hide and seek” Mum said “ok”. 

  

I am glad to be back to Mum that falling was very scary but it was close and we landed on the right plane (the Australian plane) and then we lied about the hide and seek. In fact it was kind of FUN from falling off a plane.

THE END

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